Humanoid #1 (restart)

"Alright. What are you going to do now? Do you have anywhere to stay?"

"i don't need anywhere to stay"
before she could respond Grive took off into the night

George stared after him in wonderment.
"I should have known... Viro all over."

[ahem, are you forgetting that all things 'prior' to this topic never happened?]

[no, because somewhere on the first few pages I found Viro, and we talked. He was blunt, and so is Grive.

Btw, do you watch Bleach?]

George sighed and walked off, hands in pockets. She could see a bench a little way away, and decided she would sit there for a little while.

[no, and saying all over makes it sound like you've had more experience with Viro when she's only had one conversation with him]

(i meant from her experience with him, it didn't mean that she knew him that well, but from her impression of him grive is him all over)

Kipan walked back to the place where he first met George and Moz hoping to find Moz

[lmao viro is more emoish now isnt he.... or just anti social....]

Zyle looked at viro "..... fine" got in his car and sat there

Moz watched Kipan aproach "Hey there!"

George sat on the bench and waited. She wanted someone to come and find her, someone who she could trust.

"Oh Hi Moz, look I can't stop he lied," Kipan said but when not hearing a reply from Moz then continued walking. As he turned round the corner he saw George "You ok?" He asked

"Yeah. I'm waiting for someone..." She said

"May I ask why?" Kipan said

"Sure."

"Then Why are you waiting for someone?" kipan said

"I'm waiting to tell him something. Something I wish I'd said long ago."
She sighed.
"But I don't think I'll ever see him again, unless he comes to see me first."

"And who is this that you speak of?" Kipan said

"I'd rather not say," she said quietly.

"I understand," Kipan said and sat down beside her he began playing a sooting melody and sang in a hushed voice.

George relaxed slightly and leant back. She stared at the rooftops and hoped that she would spot him there.

(who is it?)

Kipan ended the song and closed his eyes in soft remeberance

[i can't say, it would ruin my plotline =P]

George's eyes widened. She had thought she had seen a figure, just for a moment; but it had been lost amongst the blackness.

(is it Kipan?)

Kipan then began another song

As time go by
We must endure
The hardships, we sigh
Love which slip through the fingers

Why must time be so cruel
Why must it taunt so
Why must it play with our minds
Why oh Why?

[no.]

George got up; she had seen him again. Without even saying bye, she leapt up onto the roof of a terraced house and ran off